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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: notes app apology

    I can imagine someone thinking over a text and then not sending one, because it doesn’t feel right.Everything just feels so cold and wrong and different.There’s so much to say, ...

    Aug 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: hot cicada summer

    It’s the feeling of not belonging somewhere.Of feeling like an alien.I liked that there was no sets the feel of that loneliness in a crowd.Of sticking out.This poem could also ...

    Aug 23, 2022
  • Lyrics » Humor, Fanfiction Re: "Let it Load"

    I know this is old but I’m going to review anyway.First of all, this will always be matter the era, we’ll always search up anything that comes to mind. Second ...

    Aug 22, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: somewhere, folded in under the horizon

    I will try and interpret the poems.The first one is about depression, the second one is about finding positivity (the horizon) in life (the destination). The third one is about ...

    Aug 21, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Writers Block

    I hate when this happens.Right when I have a good idea and I’m all excited about it, everything only goes downhill from there.I suddenly have no idea what I’ve just ...

    Aug 21, 2022
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God

    Hilarious! I liked it. It reminds me of when I was writing my story “Eloise-the demented doll woman” (which you can check out on my profile) and how I was ...

    Aug 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Wrong Cheese

    Goodness! Poor Heather! All she wanted was Red Leicester cheese.She got every kind of cheese imaginable but not the one she wanted.I never tried Red Leicester favorite is Brie, but ...

    Aug 18, 2022
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Transcript of an Encounter with a Mighty Green Beast in the Green Room

    I couldn’t stop laughing. I’m imagining Green room works as beasts. I’m sure you have a lot of slaying (I mean reviewing) to do in the Green room, because there ...

    Aug 18, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Dementis: Chapter 1

    Hmm..I could be wrong, but I have a feeling Kaya isn’t crazy. Maybe she was in the wrong place at the wrong time and that’s how she ended up in ...

    Aug 16, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: You should totes ignore this.

    I’m going to read your other works.But for now, I’ll review this. Why? Because I can! First of all, this was incredibly breathtaking. This sentence is so meaningful and powerful. ...

    Aug 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Imagined Impossibilities

    I think you are using flower imagery to show that even beautiful things like flowers dry out and die.I would say that I emphasize with the speaker because I feel ...

    Aug 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Numbscullery

    It seems as though this starts as a deathly poem and ends as a dreamy one.Were the lower case letters intentional? What was the theme of this poem? Is there ...

    Aug 13, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The kings eldest child, prologue

    Quite interesting! I feel like they will suffer the fate of all royal families and come crashing down.The family will kill and burn each other.A legacy drenched in blood and ...

    Aug 12, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Haiku Sequence [Library, Painted stone and Bougainvillea]

    Each individual haiku you wrote holds its own special story.The library holds books and adventures of all kind.The painted stone is art amongst the green gracefully growing on it.Finally,we have ...

    Aug 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Wounds of Love

    Love is beautiful.But as beautiful as it is,it hurts like a gaping wound.When the one you love disappears from your grasp forever.Forever in your heart,yet no longer yours to love.Just..gone.I ...

    Aug 11, 2022


For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
— Audrey Hepburn