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Hello! I’ve come to review your poem. First thing I want to say is WOW. I love how it feels like the girl is lost and trying to find her ...

I liked how you wrote this poem. It feels like the introduction to an epic fantasy series and I really enjoy reading fantasies. You can feel the determination in this ...

Hello! I’ve come to review your story. First off, I would like to mention how much I love the creepiness of it. The idea that a party literally kills toy ...

I have no idea if Beatrice or Amelia should be trusted. Amelia didn’t even explain things to Kim. She just sent her to the mysterious Beatrice. If I’m not mistaken, ...

The narrator wants true, honest love, which means telling their partner when they are in the wrong and sometimes feeling hatred for them. But everything is hidden under smiles and ...

Eating slugs:A young boy crushes hard on one of the girls. She is the only thing on his mind . His friends grow annoyed with him. They dare him to ...

This shows that maybe Narcissius is aware of his curse and is aware that what he’s doing is wrong, but can’t help the vain desire to just stare and stare ...

Very eerie..never go against the wishes of those you love, or they will come back to haunt you. Silas should have burned her body like she asked him to. I ...

Whoa, whoa, WHOA! That went from zero to one hundred real quick. I liked it. I have a few questions, though. How is the narrator telling the story? Did they ...

Oh goodness…She’s sending Kim far, far away, to the house of crazies! Maybe her Dad is one of them. Maybe he (whoever he may be) is a necromancer and she’s ...

Kim has brought back a bunch of dead frogs? What will she do next? Suppose her powers get out of hand? What if her Dad is dead and she brings ...

Who was the Great-Grandmother, exactly? A wild woman or a woman who followed her dreams? That is left for us, the reader, to decide. This poem was deliciously dark and ...

The individual tries desperately to rid their face of any blemishes, to show that they can be beautiful in this cruel world. Beauty isn’t just a desire, it’s a need. ...

I saw that you wrote this entry in 2020. I have no idea if you intend to continue this series. If you do, then I hope Luke is let out ...

Goodness! I thought that Luke was turning to the dark side for a moment. The I just said sounds like I’m talking about Star Wars if taken out of context. ...