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Re: notes app apology
I can imagine someone thinking over a text and then not sending one, because it doesn’t feel right.Everything just feels so cold and wrong and different.There’s so much to say, ...
Aug 25, 2022 -
Re: hot cicada summer
It’s the feeling of not belonging somewhere.Of feeling like an alien.I liked that there was no sets the feel of that loneliness in a crowd.Of sticking out.This poem could also ...
Aug 23, 2022 -
Re: "Let it Load"
I know this is old but I’m going to review anyway.First of all, this will always be matter the era, we’ll always search up anything that comes to mind. Second ...
Aug 22, 2022 -
Re: somewhere, folded in under the horizon
I will try and interpret the poems.The first one is about depression, the second one is about finding positivity (the horizon) in life (the destination). The third one is about ...
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: Writers Block
I hate when this happens.Right when I have a good idea and I’m all excited about it, everything only goes downhill from there.I suddenly have no idea what I’ve just ...
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: How To Take Writing Notes Like A God
Hilarious! I liked it. It reminds me of when I was writing my story “Eloise-the demented doll woman” (which you can check out on my profile) and how I was ...
Aug 19, 2022 -
Re: The Wrong Cheese
Goodness! Poor Heather! All she wanted was Red Leicester cheese.She got every kind of cheese imaginable but not the one she wanted.I never tried Red Leicester favorite is Brie, but ...
Aug 18, 2022 -
Re: Transcript of an Encounter with a Mighty Green Beast in the Green Room
I couldn’t stop laughing. I’m imagining Green room works as beasts. I’m sure you have a lot of slaying (I mean reviewing) to do in the Green room, because there ...
Aug 18, 2022 -
Re: Dementis: Chapter 1
Hmm..I could be wrong, but I have a feeling Kaya isn’t crazy. Maybe she was in the wrong place at the wrong time and that’s how she ended up in ...
Aug 16, 2022 -
Re: You should totes ignore this.
I’m going to read your other works.But for now, I’ll review this. Why? Because I can! First of all, this was incredibly breathtaking. This sentence is so meaningful and powerful. ...
Aug 15, 2022 -
Re: Imagined Impossibilities
I think you are using flower imagery to show that even beautiful things like flowers dry out and die.I would say that I emphasize with the speaker because I feel ...
Aug 15, 2022 -
Re: Numbscullery
It seems as though this starts as a deathly poem and ends as a dreamy one.Were the lower case letters intentional? What was the theme of this poem? Is there ...
Aug 13, 2022 -
Re: The kings eldest child, prologue
Quite interesting! I feel like they will suffer the fate of all royal families and come crashing down.The family will kill and burn each other.A legacy drenched in blood and ...
Aug 12, 2022 -
Re: Haiku Sequence [Library, Painted stone and Bougainvillea]
Each individual haiku you wrote holds its own special story.The library holds books and adventures of all kind.The painted stone is art amongst the green gracefully growing on it.Finally,we have ...
Aug 12, 2022 -
Re: The Wounds of Love
Love is beautiful.But as beautiful as it is,it hurts like a gaping wound.When the one you love disappears from your grasp forever.Forever in your heart,yet no longer yours to love.Just..gone.I ...
Aug 11, 2022
