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The man burns on the inside. So he burns the woman to extinguish his own flame. He wishes not to face his own feelings and instead takes his anger out ...

Why yes, Paxton, you’re in big trouble, because you don’t try. At all. As for the story, it’s very interesting. I wonder what happened in Paxton’s life to make him ...

It looks like the boy and Quill only have each other. It’s them against the war. What will become of them? Will they be able to stay together? Or will ...

Cool story so far! It seems like Paxton doesn’t want to make an effort to change his life, like he already gave up. Amanda seems to love Paxton and wants ...

Oh man..how is Kim going to get anything done with those kids around? It’s better for Kim to be alone, without the others bothering her. I have one question, though. ...

I really like this extract of a story. I’ll be sure to read the actual story if you post it. I like how you described Paxton getting increasingly angry with ...

Wow! Scary! I don’t think that there was an actual otherworldly monster at all. I think that Bradley may have killed his family and set his house on fire in ...

Whoa…that… was spooky. I didn’t know who was narrating until near the end of the story. Where is Ryan now? In a pyscho ward? Is Ivan there too? Did Ivan ...

I’d thought I’d ought to go and check this story out. I like it! It’s very simple and cute. I like the ending, when Joy and her family are decorating ...

Looks like Susie Z is going to have a lot to deal with. Susie Z is a member of a very powerful family and she was destined to save the ...

Lessons all of humanity could learn. What I liked about this poem was the mention of a ghost in a positive way. Like the friend who is always there for ...

Goodness, Jasmine! You should know not to to stick your nose in things you don’t understand. Bad things happen to kids who creep to places they aren’t supposed to creep…*insert ...

What a lovely poem! YWS is my favorite writing site. This does describe the site wonderfully. We all come together to share our ideas, our thoughts, and our stories. Hopefully ...

Hilarious, and wonderful! I totally act like Marge whenever Halloween arrives! Nobody can stop me when I’m in costume. As for Mandy..wow, she sounds so annoying and inconsiderate. I just…wow. ...

Ah yes, the average day at YWS. A talking cat and an evil cake. Really pretty normal. And popcorn is such an abomination. I dislike popcorn in real life because ...