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  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: to you, my love from far away

    I think that the title works with the story! No, it’s not unrealistic. A wife misses her husband, so she writes letters to him. I think that the ending is ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Roles

    I think that the ending is actually pretty wholesome. A young child takes things into their own hands. Yes, the form of the poem does match how it’s written. Nothing ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: What a Girlfriend Is (or Serena’s Slice-of-life in Space)

    Ahhh Serena and Izzy are so cute together! I like how E4 supports them being together, it’s so wholesome to see. I hope that their relationship stays intact no matter ...

    Jan 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: down the rabbit hole

    I like how it’s written like magic. Like writing is a fantastical art and in many ways, it is. It can be hard though, as shown in this poem. It ...

    Jan 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #5, Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 2

    Aw, poor Cleo! When she’s not sick, she gets freaking kidnapped. I wonder how many days have passed since Cleo was kidnapped by Hana. I’m guessing maybe two or three ...

    Jan 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #4: Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 1

    The Kitsune’s name is Hana. I wonder where Hana is taking Cleo and where they’re going. I’m amazed at how calm Cleo is right now. She must have had really ...

    Jan 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #3: Police Transcript 03

    Alright, so I’m changing my mind about this ”victim”. Exactly who do they think they are to be calling the police like that when there is nothing wrong? I’m not ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #2: Police Transcript 02

    So the victim has healing powers? Maybe the victim is the true angel that is mentioned in the title. Could they be a possible candidate of the police force? I ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #1: Police Transcript 01

    I’m glad that everything went well with the capturing of the suspect. I saw this in the Green Room and thought to take a look. I wonder who these angels ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Muditā

    I wonder if they will reunite once again, the two of them. I didn’t read the full story, but I would imagine that the writer of this letter never saw ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: of costars, garlic and onions

    So maybe Mandy and Chad’s relationship won’t be quite the same as Phillip and the woman that Mandy is playing have, but that’s alright. They’d have their own wonderfully weird ...

    Jan 2, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dangerous Game

    It sounds like the eagle escaped the hunters. I think it’s an eagle, anyway. I also wanted to point out the date, “28/7/21”. Does this take place in the future ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: CAMP (Note the Double Meaning)

    Hilarious! I probably would have been one of the weird theater kids lol. I think my favorite characters were poor Michael Castor and that crying boy with the mascara. Unfortunately ...

    Dec 31, 2022
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Green Door

    This world that Subject No. 3936 lives in seems like our world, but not quite. The seminars and the University seem to be the only things in the world. Once ...

    Dec 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Culture Re: Prologue: Zoo-Yow!Ugly $urGEonz

    I’ve never seen a story written like this before. This was really interesting. So let me get this straight:A woman is posing as a science teacher to inspire independence to ...

    Dec 29, 2022


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