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Re: Nightshade and the wolf girl (origin of Lupita)
I like Lupita. She cares about Nara. Her heart is in the right place. Honestly, the characters so far are all really special in their own way. I’ll check out ...
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Re: Nightshade's favorite feline (origin of Nara)
Interesting. Nightshade has a new friend now. I hope that Nara is alright with this. It seems like she is, but there’s still another chapter to read. At least Nightshade ...
Feb 22, 2023 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Misc.
I like all of these ideas! My favorite one was the one with the playground. I find it interesting how Kim worries about people dying in a brand new playground. ...
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Re: Origin of Nightshade
The humans were lucky. I’m glad that she at least left them off with a warning. I have a feeling that Diantha and Zephyr might encounter Nightshade again later on. ...
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Re: Rolls & Roles
The original was good, but this revision was really great. Now we get to read about how the child feels. The child has a role that will shape and mold ...
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Re: Crimson night
This was so sad. He really thinks that he’s alone. There could be others like him who might be willing to help. I guess that it’s too late for him. ...
Feb 18, 2023 -
Re: Forbidden Love
I wasn’t scared of this poem. I saw this as a romance poem, where a man has a devoted love to nature. It is kind of creepy if you think ...
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Re: You
Who is the creation? The girl or the speaker? Could the girl have created the speaker and they want to be left alone? Maybe the speaker created the girl and ...
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Re: The Devourer -- Horror Poem
When I first read this poem, I thought that it was about a demon. It is, except that the demon is Winter. Now that I think about it, it makes ...
Feb 15, 2023 -
Re: Lovewell's Song
Even in death, love still resides. Even after death, there is still love. Maybe one day they will reunite with each other. Until then, she is all alone. This piece ...
Feb 14, 2023 -
Re: The school of magical spies-part one
They all thought that Kat was evil? That journal entry was from 1963. There could be a chance that someone else named Kat wrote it. Or maybe she is subconsciously ...
Feb 13, 2023 -
Re: The Vamp (Chapter Three)
It’s not the end of Madison. I get this vibe that she’s not just going to die. I also feel like Francois won’t catch her. Maybe Sirena will take her ...
Feb 12, 2023 -
Re: She Don’t Want a Lot for Christmas
This poem holds so much meaning. I can feel the power oozing from the words. I now understand life and its purpose. The wisdom and grace of Mariah Carey has ...
Feb 11, 2023 -
Re: The Jesters' Show (Chapter 2)
Oh god, what kind of world is this with demons and happiness juice and masks? It sounds like our world, but not quite. Nevertheless, I’m intrigued. Is Julia herself a ...
Feb 10, 2023 -
Re: The Jesters' Show
Ahhhhhh this story is just so good! I hope that Julia is alright. I kind of ship Jake and Julia already. I like the romance (potential romance, anyway) in this ...
Feb 9, 2023
