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Re: Draft that I deleted
This essay was really interesting! I do agree that cliques shown in high school movies are annoying. It’s like the people making them don’t really care about teens. :( Everyone ...
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Re: The First Golden Goose and The Origins of The Knights: A KotGR Tale
What an inspiring origin story! I’ve found out a lot more YWS lore. :0 I wonder how many more golden goose hatchlings there are left. Probably a multitude of them. ...
Mar 31, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2- the second to last unicorn-chapter 4
Well I hope that they find Ellie soon, because being in an alternate dimension for too long could have some bad effects on her. What if she stays too long ...
Mar 29, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2-the second-to last unicorn-chapter 3
So Ellie has an evil twin? Interesting…wonder what the evil twin is going to do. Take Ellie’s unicorn? If the twin gets to it first, will the unicorn become evil? ...
Mar 28, 2023 -
Re: Spring Into Summer, and Summer to Fall
I’m going to have to watch “The Witch” one day, because I love the vibes in this poem. It seems like the narrator is giving themselves over to the tempting ...
Mar 27, 2023 -
Re: Aytra Islands Intro
WHOA… That was epic! The Dalis and the Anors have been in this great war and now there’s a person who could possibly be from BOTH sides? Maybe they’ll be ...
Mar 27, 2023 -
Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 5
I’m listening to Dinah Shore songs right now to get the vibe of the story and I like it! Now, onto the chapter. It’s sad that even her brother slammed ...
Mar 25, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2: The Second To Last Unicorn-Chapter 2
I think I’ll read “The Unicorn Quest” books, because unicorns are, as Ellie said, UNICORNS. Onto the chapter. I liked that Ellie climbed the top of the mountain no matter ...
Mar 24, 2023 -
Re: recycled
So why is Mallory friends with the villains? Seems a bit…SUSPICIOUS. I guess I’ll have to find out in the next episode. Snow and Charles must have already switched bodies ...
Mar 23, 2023 -
Re: Blood and Water
My heart just about burst at the end of the story. The beginning started out harsh but the ending…so heartwarming and sentimental. I agree with Aunt Ludivine that the true ...
Mar 22, 2023 -
Re: devotio
I enjoyed this story. It was tragic, but I liked reading it. I think that this is talking about wanting something despite the circumstance. In the beginning, the boy wanted ...
Mar 21, 2023 -
Re: House of Blood: Part One: Chapter Zero ( Characters and Introductions)
This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I particularly appreciate Jake’s nicknames for the villains, they are quite clever and creative. I think that the Faceless Man ...
Mar 20, 2023 -
Re: The Tooth Fairy
When Wanda says that the Tooth Fairy is not going to “take another child” from her, does that mean that…Wanda had children before Timothy? Children who also lost their teeth? ...
Mar 19, 2023 -
Re: The Life and Subsequent Ending of a Marshmallow
Poor Arnold. All he wanted was to burn bright, but he melted away. At least he had Ms.Cocoa with him. Both marshmallow and hot chocolate will be remembered. In fact, ...
Mar 17, 2023 -
Re: The Spooky Squad: Chapter 2
This chapter is great! If Grace/Giggles were a real toy, I’d totally want her. As for the clowns…oh my god…YOU FOUND MY LONG LOST FAMILY/j! And…that devil horned guy Grace ...
Mar 15, 2023
