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Re: The Grave in Grandma’s Garden: Chapter One
Is this a rewrite of that necromancer story? I like it! It seems like Kim’s Mom really cares about her. :) It sucks that she got in trouble, though. I ...
Apr 14, 2023 -
Re: Little Sophia | Part 2
Well…that was more wholesome than I expected. Is this from a LIGHTS ARE OFF video or did you make this up? Because I like this sequel and I’d watch the ...
Apr 13, 2023 -
Re: Little Sophia
Ohhh I’ve seen a few videos from LIGHTS ARE OFF and yes, it is Nightmare Fuel. Whatever might be awaiting Sophia isn’t going to be good, because nothing in those ...
Apr 12, 2023 -
Re: The Humble Quest
I believe that the message of this poem is that no matter how dangerous the journey may seem, it is vital to continue on so that you may find answers, ...
Apr 11, 2023 -
Re: lost love of late july.
I’ve never been in a romantic relationship before, but I always imagined the best. Of course, real life is different from what anyone can imagine. We meet people we feel ...
Apr 10, 2023 -
Re: A Spider's Place
A lot of people are scared of spiders but this seems cute. I imagine a crowd of little black spiders crawling, in small, dainty flowers. This also made me think ...
Apr 9, 2023 -
Re: recycled
James and the Prince must have switched bodies. How did the swap happen, though? Who would switch their bodies? I don’t think that it’s Rachel or Maleficent that switched them. ...
Apr 8, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Ch. 1.1
Avenge the deaths of his parents? How noble of him! I wonder who killed his parents. Whoever did is going to have a horrible day. Damian and Athena must sense ...
Apr 6, 2023 -
Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - Prologue
Rei sounds like a zany little guy! Just an overall, all-around, fun little clown who loves mayhem and murder. I like Rei’s design, it’s cute and creepy. But from the ...
Apr 5, 2023 -
Re: The Vulture
Either what happened was his (I’m assuming the narrator is a guy) imagination emphasizing the girl’s toxicity, or the girl is a literal monster that needs his life force to ...
Apr 3, 2023 -
Re: Kade and Raina - Part One
Cute beginning. :) I’m already shipping Kade and Raina even though they haven’t met yet. I think that Raina is Kade’s muse. Either Valerie is Raina’s girlfriend or her best ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: Draft that I deleted
This essay was really interesting! I do agree that cliques shown in high school movies are annoying. It’s like the people making them don’t really care about teens. :( Everyone ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: The First Golden Goose and The Origins of The Knights: A KotGR Tale
What an inspiring origin story! I’ve found out a lot more YWS lore. :0 I wonder how many more golden goose hatchlings there are left. Probably a multitude of them. ...
Mar 31, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2- the second to last unicorn-chapter 4
Well I hope that they find Ellie soon, because being in an alternate dimension for too long could have some bad effects on her. What if she stays too long ...
Mar 29, 2023 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2-the second-to last unicorn-chapter 3
So Ellie has an evil twin? Interesting…wonder what the evil twin is going to do. Take Ellie’s unicorn? If the twin gets to it first, will the unicorn become evil? ...
Mar 28, 2023
