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Re: Hybrids: Chapter 2
Nooo… hopefully Sako isn’t really dead. That would be sad if he was. Then Yagi would have to escape…alone. Maybe Sako isn’t dead, but is transforming into his full demon/angel ...
May 20, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 1
The doctor seems trustworthy for now. Hopefully he’ll stay trustworthy and help Yagi escape. Then Yagi could help Sako escape. I don’t know if the doctor is pretending or not. ...
May 19, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids Prologue
They just lock them away for being hybrids? Maybe they’re afraid of hybrids and what they’ll do to humans. If so, then…that’s not fair to all of the other hybrids. ...
May 18, 2023 -
Re: Prologue - The Stars, The Moon, The Sun
And thus the stars are now humans. I liked that in the end, the sun and the moon came together. Nothing could keep them apart, for they had come together ...
May 16, 2023 -
Re: The Spooky Squad: Chapter 3
Casey looks so cute! I have to say, this was the saddest chapter I read. Casey is so sweet, Sarah was lucky to have them as a friend. I REALLY ...
May 16, 2023 -
Re: The Overnight Trip............ true story! I promise, really!
I’m sorry that happened to you. The important thing is that you and the others are okay. I’m sorry that my stories scare you. You don’t have to read them ...
May 14, 2023 -
Re: Behind Closed Windows
Off to bring color back to the world! It won’t be an easy journey, but I’m sure that it will pay off in the end. Or not. I hope that ...
May 12, 2023 -
Re: "and you must keep your soul like a secret in your throat"
Romantic vampires? Yes please! This reminds me of when I used to watch “The vampire diaries” and “The originals”. This vampire in the poem is probably seen as a villain, ...
May 12, 2023 -
Re: on the rooftop
“Friends”? Lying on the guy’s lap and still calling him a “friend”? No way, by then the relationship surpassed friendship. I’m sure that the guy likes the reader too. We ...
May 11, 2023 -
Re: when did i start eating my friends [folding them into kitchen knives and napkins]
It seems that the protagonist ”eats friends” because they want to ensure that their friends stay forever, even if it hurts them. He’s used to being alone, but wants some ...
May 9, 2023 -
Re: Little Black Flower
All flowers are beautiful, even black ones. Even if the flowers that are brighter are more desirable, the black flowers still have value. They could grow, or they could have ...
May 8, 2023 -
Re: When we wake up...
I have felt like I needed to write down ideas that come across my mind in a spark. In dreams, there is a world of freedom and possibility. Real life ...
May 7, 2023 -
Re: The Watcher
Ha! It’s just about watching too much Netflix! There are so many good shows on Netflix that it can really take up so much time lol. I thought that the ...
May 5, 2023 -
Re: Playground 666- Horror Story
This reminds me of something weird and creepy you’d find while scrolling through recommended YouTube videos. The kind of thing that you’re scared to look at, but curious enough to ...
May 4, 2023 -
Re: Phantom Pianist SS
Beautifully haunting. It’s like Chopin’s ghost was there to help Cameron every step of the way. Or was he? I liked how you described the music getting darker and more ...
May 3, 2023
