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crazedasian1

  • Poetry » Other, General Re:

    Thank you everyone for the positive feedback on my poem! ohhellothere Punctuation in poems has always been difficult for me, but thank you for the help. I know I'm going ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Can't say that I love you

    I really really enjoyed reading this. I especially love the format you wrote it in. It catches the eye and makes the poem more enjoyable and fun.

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Your Dreams Kept me Awake

    WOW, this was just plain fantastic. I can really feel the pain in this poem. The only thing is maybe you may want to elaborate on a few lines. But, ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Scars

    I have already read this twice, if that tells you anything. So powerful and so strong! I love it.

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Limerick 2

    Very comical, made me laugh out loud (which is hard to do) Good Job!

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring Serenade

    I really like this, it's short and sweet. You captured the imagery of Spring beautifully, so bravo!

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'm Strong Enough

    Wow, this is amazing. It really got me thinking and I was easily able to make connections with my life and friends. I really have nothing to say other than ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: First Kissess and Innocent Wishes

    I really loved this poem and even though it was short, you really got the point through. You are a really talented writer. Keep writing!

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Life She Wanted

    Thank you for your reviews. They really made me think about my poem and writing style. I am definitely going to take all of your advice into consideration.

    Nov 30, 2011


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