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Thank you everyone for the positive feedback on my poem! ohhellothere Punctuation in poems has always been difficult for me, but thank you for the help. I know I'm going ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Can't say that I love you
I really really enjoyed reading this. I especially love the format you wrote it in. It catches the eye and makes the poem more enjoyable and fun.
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Your Dreams Kept me Awake
WOW, this was just plain fantastic. I can really feel the pain in this poem. The only thing is maybe you may want to elaborate on a few lines. But, ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Scars
I have already read this twice, if that tells you anything. So powerful and so strong! I love it.
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Limerick 2
Very comical, made me laugh out loud (which is hard to do) Good Job!
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Spring Serenade
I really like this, it's short and sweet. You captured the imagery of Spring beautifully, so bravo!
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm Strong Enough
Wow, this is amazing. It really got me thinking and I was easily able to make connections with my life and friends. I really have nothing to say other than ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: First Kissess and Innocent Wishes
I really loved this poem and even though it was short, you really got the point through. You are a really talented writer. Keep writing!
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Life She Wanted
Thank you for your reviews. They really made me think about my poem and writing style. I am definitely going to take all of your advice into consideration.
Nov 30, 2011
