cpynes5575

Sup I have a couple of points. Number 1, I love poems like this, about warriors fighting for their countries and dying in the line of battle. It's noble. Reading ...

I like this poem for a lot of reasons. Girls these days are so focused on looking pretty they lose sight of what pretty really is. They care to much ...

I love things like this because it doesn't give a lot of detail. You are free to think about the character in any way you want. He could be a ...

The transitions in this are amazing. You went from third person to first person (if that's correct) so fast. First you were saying things like ' but when I saw ...