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Hello rubykae, thanks a lot for reviewing and the support, I really appreciate it! :D About the italicized, you are absolutely right, I did use it with the intent to ...

Hello Caterpickle, thanks a lot for reviewing, I really appreciate it! About the last stanza, the only reason I felt compelled to write to the reader because, like you said ...

Hello crobbins, thanks a lot for the review and support, I really appreciate it! About the fact that not every birthmarks are positive I thought the way I used was ...

Yes I think adding the cofession later on would be best because your first chapters have full scale action and I love them so the cofession won't break the flow ...

Thanks a lot. :D Have a good day too!

No problem. And I'm looking for as much feedback as possible because I want to improve my story so any review is welcome. :D About your story I was actually ...

Hello dracowave, thanks a lot for reviewing and for the support, I really appreciate it. :D About her past there isn't much to be said because as the Law states ...

Indeed, all the best for us! I really want to improve in poetry :D

Hello pancake, thank you a lot for reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it! Unfortunately I'm still very fresh at poetry and this one only has a year or so ...

Hello felistia, The reason why I didn't expand the poem it's because it is suppose to be a prayer, something they would pray or even chant before going to battle. ...

Ops! Me and wanting to know more... I'm making you spill the beans! But now that I know I'm even more intrigued with your story, I definitly want to read ...

Good luck then and I hope it works well. :D

Humm.... Maybe in the second paragraph when you mention being tranported and how the world played a joke on Zaila I think it would be nice to instead of the ...

Hello wridingislife, I said I would come and here I am! :D I liked this first chapter very much, your idea to make the watches work by fear is very ...

You are right about readers having their own personal image about characters and worlds, I myself included because when I read a book I love to take a little time ...