corey_hillis

Hey! :) Ok. I disagree with Mitsuki. This is your story so if you want to talk about fuck and fucking all the time then go for it. Just a ...

Hey! :) Ok. Even though i think that this was jsut a little something for fun and not a serious poem I am going to critique it anyways. Words,are there ...

Hey! I thought this was an excellent short poem. Just one thing I saw wrong witht the first oen and you fixed that in the second one so i won't ...

Well well well. I must admit that was very interesting. It made me laugh. I really don't have much to say about it. I didn't notice anything bad about it ...

Hey! Not too bad. Just a few things thta i noticed, but most of them have been covered by the others already so i don't need to go over them ...

I thought it was esceelent. Very well written and layed out. I just saw one thing thta i didnt't like. and the children searched for any sign of hope... but ...

Wow. This was a really good teaser. I am looking froward to seeing the progression of this story. Just a few errors i saw. My aunt and I were alone ...

Wow. I am truly impressed with your writing style. It caught me into the story right off the bat. I'm not positive but i think i found an error. “There ...