cooldude19967

So sorry this took so long, I've been really, really busy. I think you have a good idea here, but I found one main problem throughout the story which really ...

Oh boy, it seems like I'm hopelessly late. Sorry it took me so long to get around to his, I've been a bit busy lately. First off, I don't normally ...

Lyrics... well this is new. To be honest I've never even looked in this section and would not have noticed your work if you hadn't asked me to review it, ...

Although I must admit, I have not read Hamlet and barely even know the plot line, you asked me to look over this, and so here I am! I've attached ...

Well... I warned you I was rather harsh. If you want my review see the attachment, I din't want to have to bother with making everything red again whe I ...

That... was amazing. I absolutely loved it as a whole, one of the best pieces of poetry I've read in a long time. However, I'm still picky enought that there ...

That was a very good rewrite of a classic story! you really put a lot into you MC (I wanted to say heroine but...) and it turned out really well. ...

I'm not a poet, nor do I read poetry, but I really do like the way you presented this! A couple of the lines felt a little bit off, such ...

Nice continuation. The fact that even though she had just been betrayed by someone she though was her sister and then could laugh at the thought of evil ducks, is ...

I enjoyed the reference to Tolkien at the end, but I can't remember anywhere in Harry Potter where he talked about that kind of thing, so that book reference didn't ...

Didn't think I would, but i actually like the choppy style in which you wrote this story. THe only parts I didn't like were how you described how Maria was ...

Confusing. Interesting but confusing. To be honest, I didn't know the gender of the narrator until about half way through, and that little revelation put a new light on everything ...

I like it but hope there's more. You have absolutly zero plot at the moment. This could be a good introduction, it's very descriptive. I'd love it if you could ...

I really liked this. Especially the beginning, with the dreams. One thing I'd add though is if you could think up another one that would be nice. Three just seems ...

That was way to long to be posted in one part. Very few people are actually going to read it the whole way through. Anyway, from what little I did ...