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Gosh, this was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I'm a sucker for metaphors and analogies, and this was done so wonderfully. There was a lovely balance between descriptive narrative and descriptive met

Haha thank you, friend! Yeah, I understand what you mean about the format. When I copied and pasted this from the original doc, the formatting got irritatingly screwed up and ...

Hello! I thought it was quite interesting. Different, and your imagination is wonderful. But now, to get down to the constructive criticism part of this comment, if you don't mind? ...

*I'm NOT beta'ing this though, and so... Oy. I'm so sorry. Of all things to mistype... That

Omg... This was honestly amazing. I wish I could give you a better review with some actual constructive criticism, but I'm not the best poet. Haha You told such an ...

Omg this was amazing. That's all I have left to say. Haha

This was too amazing for words, honestly. It reminds me of all the things He is capable of. It's pretty heartwarming.(:

Haha! Cute. Definitely amusing.

This confused me at some parts, but it was awesome. Never Alone by Barlow Girls, right? I love the connection you made to the song. Not exactly what I had ...

So, I realize that I've made a really big mess of just trying to get all of this story posted, and I'm truly sorry. I've decided to post this instead ...