confetti

I felt the mild, comforting sunlight warming my damp body. I lay there for a few seconds more, absorbed in bliss. I opened my eyes and felt a sharp, stinging ...

I felt the mild, comforting sunlight warming my damp body. I lay there for a few seconds more, absorbed in bliss. I opened my eyes and felt a sharp, stinging ...

Ah alright, if you feel okay using other's ideas, do as you please.

This seems like a rip-off of this: I'm not sure if you meant to do it, but I doubt it's just a coincidence.

I would suggest putting this in poetry.

I only wish I could click love instead of like.

I love this, it's short, simple, but at the same time very complex. There's quite a bit of emotion in this piece, and unlike many poems it has a message ...

two words: Bloody Brilliant!

This is so incredibly lovely. I don't really have anything else to say, ahaha, sorry! I just really loved this.

This poem was written well. The emotions were shown very clearly in your choice of words, and it had a very powerful message. It made me feel a little depressed, ...