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  • Poetry » Science, General Re: The Moon

    I liked the "ABAB" rhyme scheme in the first stanza and I would have liked to see it follow through the entire poem. I did enjoy the repetition of "moon" ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: In the Morning

    This was so awesome. I'm a sucker for horror! I really liked the tone of the poem and the description in it. I really liked reading it. I can only ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Life's terrors

    I really enjoyed reading this. I felt all the different perspectives strongly. I found this entertaining though! Good work! Keep on writing! :)

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Scars

    This is very powerful and honestly, I didn't want it to end. I was intrigued by it. Good work! :)

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)

    MEOW MEOW MEOW MEOW? MEEEEOOW MEW!!!! This is wonderful.

    Jan 24, 2014


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