coborski

You know, I've read a few of your poems and I want to tell you how much I respect your writing - you hit everything dead on. This is a ...

This could be the biography of my best friend and I; I am so timid and she is sooooo outgoing. I

I love this poem, you are one of the first persons to have a steady rhythm! You should read this out loud to yourself. It sounds so good, rather like ...

This is so sad, I want to know whats going to happen to the little girl - her father is so angry at her. This story reminds my of an ...

Wow. Your rhyming and rhythm is simply spectacular. I can't say how pleasing this is to the ear if read aloud, it lends itself to music. Be careful though, your ...

Oh so cute! This is amazingly accurate, nobody could've expressed it better. This may sound odd but I love the way you rhymed back and 'apple mac' as apposed to ...

I love the ending ;) and I agree 110% I think though, that you shouldn't use expletives. You could have found a better alternative to the line; "you worthless piece ...