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Re: Oh for the love of spring!
Wow, there's is only one word for that! Well done, the poem is light, airy, and moving, I was riverted to the spot while I read this and it flowed ...
Jul 1, 2012 -
Re: Scary Part
Hi, I thought you did a very good job with this. I'm not going to to go into nit picks because I felt it was very good and deserved a ...
Jul 1, 2012 -
Re: lien
there is one country inscribed on the inside of your left wrist. its rivers drench the roots of your name, and when you say it the sounds come out of ...
Jun 23, 2012 -
Re: The Black Doors Chapter 1
Hi! I thought you did really well that story, an unsuspecting twist with Destiny at the end! He thought he could make out shapes moving in the darkness. He was ...
Jun 23, 2012 -
Re: Soldier Boy: Chapter One
Okay well the first thing I'm going to say is: WELL DONE! Welcome to YWS! I thought your insight onto the story was fantastic and I creepy unexpected end. This ...
Jun 19, 2012 -
Re: Pathway Chapter 4 revised
“No, you didn’t notice, then,” He spoke woefully. “Notice what?” Mindy barked. They all paused, and David shifted uneasily under their expectant gazes. “Well, it’s kind of difficult to s
Jun 16, 2012 -
Re: That Girl
want to be that girl, your girl, but everyones girl. That girl that can stay strong, that can hold on. The girl who will push through her own fears as ...
Jun 16, 2012 -
Re: Hana and Emily
"You're still looking for the box," Hana said. "I take it you know where it is," Emily replied. The late night waves rushed over the sand dampening Emily's white gown. ...
Jun 16, 2012 -
Re: Robot Chicken
When I finally got home I told my mom what had happened, herface looked like a tomato! "You're GROUNDED!!!" She yelled in my ear. " She never believes me!" I ...
Jun 16, 2012 -
Re: Eternal Ectasy-Chapter 1
This time, when he woke up, he felt cold. He jumped up at once, startled and confused. The last thing he remembered was being buried alive; how can he be... ...
Jun 15, 2012 -
Re: I need a title still
Wake up dumbass!” She slams my door open my door without a second thought. I open my eyes to her face glaring at me. “Get the hell out! I am ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Dark Turning Chapter One : Children
Main Dishes: BURGERS SIDES : FRIES DRINKS: COKE I think that part was just great (I went to America last week) also this part: Uncle Poseidon`s not so happy either," ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Where Are the Angels
’m so lost, so lost in a life Buried in sorrow, dreary with strife I don’t have wings to sing me away I don’t know how I’ll stay okay today ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: Out for Blood - Chapter 2
Don’t lie to the boy, Presley.” Stan called, slumping down onto the worn leather couch. “Landon came home to train to be an agent. You can tell him.” Glaring at ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Night riders- good copy
Hey can you guys give me a review, by the way i am 13
May 25, 2012