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DREAM CRABS

*gasp* I just realized I forgot to do tenses. It's a little late now, but I promise I'll get to it tomorrow :D

ahh thanks :) and when there's not something to cry about on doctor who, i'll be crying happy tears anyway.

*criesssss*

clevercogs Well, it's the thought that counts. :P

Ohhhhh snap

Heyo. To get the line breaks, hit "shift" along with "enter" in the YWS publisher. That will bring the lines closer together, and then it will also keep the spaces ...

I feel so flattered that you felt that gif was appropriate for my poem. :P Thanks!

Okay, thanks! It's good to know that. I think the importance of getting feedback on your feedback is understated, honestly. :D

2. Eh, I guess you have a point, what with the Texas textbook controversy and all that. However, that's not the point that came across to me when I was ...

First, you get rid of the double spacing by hitting the "shift" key with the "enter" key when starting a new line in the publisher. Then, you should be able ...

Yas, how about "where demons are said to hide" or does that sound too much like Imagine Dragons

Eh, not a fan of either. The syllables are right but they're a little clunky. What about switching up the form a little? Like putting the word "demons" more towards ...

There's a difference between constructive criticism and just being rude, dropout. Constructive criticism= "This is a good start, but here's what you could improve and how you could improve it". ...

Just 'assuming', really. And the previous lack of critique was the reason I decided to review this, by the way :P