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Thanks!

Thanks! And I am sorry if my comments on your work seemed offensive to you, they really weren't meant that way. Bad feelings forgiven? :)

Hello, fellow wholockian violist! ;) I have to say something along the lines of the sentence you pointed out ALL. THE. TIME. The struggle is real! I'm glad that Bethany ...

No problem!

Thanks! It'll probably be a while before I'm finished with the next part. I have it planned out, but I haven't started writing it yet. Don't let the happy ending ...

Ah, I see. Thanks for clarifying!

Ah, I see. Very clever encouragement, if I do say so myself.

No problem!

...I don't think it's a story.

I can see that, sadly, I have no hope of persuading you to change your story content-wise. I'm no longer going to try, because this is obviously going nowhere. I ...

*holds hands up defensively* Woah, hold on there! Proofreading and revising is part of being a writer, and you seem very unwilling to take advice from anyone. If it seems ...

That kind of attitude isn't going to help you improve. And the way you've written this doesn't make it seem like a diary. Come on, who starts their diary by ...

I think you misunderstood me. I didn't say that her father drinking and driving was unrealistic, I said that the speaker clarifying on the line "my father" might be unrealistic ...

Ah, I see. I will point out, though, that sometimes you have to make it slightly unrealistic for the readers' sake. The writer of the note might not have, in ...

Ah, I see. Makes sense. :) Still, proofread!