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Wow, this is just amazing! I think that the drug addiction metaphor is pretty clear. Great job!

*three other verses

I know you marked it as a spoiler, but I still accidentally saw the answer. Not cool, man. Can you please edit this and take out the answer? Also, by ...

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this story. :) Also, Donny... Noble? Would this be a reference to the sacred Who? xD Keep it up!

Okay, that clears up any confusion. But you should put that in the title, or tell us in your author's note.

So this is intended to be the first chapter? I'm not sure what you're trying to say. The title says that it's chapter two.

Thanks for reviewing!

No problem. :)

Sorry, I didn't know! :)

Ah, I see. I should have paid attention to its categories. It's okay if it's lyrics. :)

Thanks! What Daniel did wrong is that he just ran away without letting Bethany say goodbye back. Maybe I could change it to make it more clear. Thanks for the ...

Thanks, and yes, I do play the viola. :)

Thanks for the advice! I did mention at the beginning that the violist was playing on a street corner, although maybe I could add a bit more description.

I'm sure that saying this is the worst poem you've ever seen is a bit of an exaggeration, and it's not a great way to start a review. Perhaps you ...

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Wow, this is really good! It speaks of lost friendship very well. I love the last stanza, because it shows that you love the friend enough to let them go. ...