Young Writers Society

Hey!! I really liked this, strangely. I guess the mood I'm getting is being in a relationship you know you're not supposed to be in...and everyone looks at you like ...

I really liked this poem..the title pulled me in. However, for some reason, it made me kind of sad...which in your case, is a good thing ;) I love to ...

Hi! I'm Cassie; today I'm going to help you with your poem. First off, I thought it was very cute. I like how the title draws in the people who ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this piece. It is short, but it's explicit and really gets straight to the point. First thing: I think this might work better if you broke ...

Hi! I really liked this poem, but I do have a couple of suggestions. If you could see my face Every second of every day I bet it would change ...

Hey! Cassie here, I'm going to review for ya. Okay...wow. I just finished reading your piece, and man, that was amazing. It gave me shivers. I love how you start ...

I really liked this piece. It asked alot of questions that I myself have asked. Good job! Now, on to the reviewing. The piece itself did not really feel like ...

First off, you really need to paragraph. No one will review your work if you don't. Make sure you're spelling is correct and you have new paragraphs when a new ...

Hiya, I'm Cassie. I'll be reviewing your work today. You did a pretty great job, but there are a few things you should work on. Grammar Mistakes I only found ...

Honestly, I got through the first couple of chapters, and they started swearing. Not good for a story; it's like a first impression. The minute your characters start swearing, people ...

Hey, it's Cici again. You've improved alot, but there are still some mistakes. This time we'll go in order of the story. I. Renee yawned, and rolled over. She had, ...

Hi, I'm Cici. I'll be reviewing your work today. :D POV Choice I hope you realize that you're in a third person point of view! It will be much harder ...