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yay ! im loving this. its fantastic [: more more more ! i suck at critiquing, sorry >.

ahh, wonderful [: cant wait to read moree ! yay :D

ahh, i like it. the internal conflict is good . touching.

awhh, this is absolutely ADORABLEE ! eeek, i love it. [:

oh my gosh... oh my gosh! OH MY GOSHH ! i cant believe he would do that >.< that pisses me off! rawrr, but dude. this is a seriously amazing ...

oh oh oh MY GOSHH ! i need moree . holy crap ! who is this guy?! im going to marry your story. lmfao ! [x

oh my goshh ! this is amazingg ! reading the rest [: keep it going xD

ohh, i really really like this story. it like definatly grabbed my attention at the beginning. im not good at critiquing so i'm not going to try. but yay [x ...

eeeeeeek ! yay taylor [x i mean..sweeney_todd lmfao ! i love youuu. and how come ive never read this? did you write this at school? because i should definatly get ...

woah, i actually read all of this ! you're really really good with description, i really like this :D its super good!

ahh, like everyone said, this was very moving. you are a super good writer, i like it [:

i really REALLY like this story. its not all about how sad she is, she always finds a bright sidee. kudos [:

this is really like...i cant think of the word. its good ! most defaintly, but it's "rough" kind of. its really good though. kudos [:

woah, this is very sad. im glad someone is writing about it. i cant wait to read more [: