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Wow. . .just wow! I LOVE this! Oh, it was your eyes, a soft seaweed green, like little meadows, of newly bloomed spring grass. Did the eyes change color? Depending ...

I loved this I read through the whole thing! :D I like the Dad and Sarah their hilarious! My favorite part is when she point the gun too his head ...

At first I didn't understand your poem until I got to the end and realized that you were talking about 'The Outsiders'. I loved this description :D Intent on vengeance, ...

This was really good I loved it (partly because in a story I'm working two people are called Grim, and Reaper too.) You have really good description when it comes ...

This was really good, I liked it. Looking at the mess on the emerald grass Tears steam, slow and warm This is not my work, I could not do this ...

I loved it!! :D Alaster and the other wolf with Nolen seemed to just disappear. :? Which makes me sad cause I liked Alaster. :) I also enjoyed how at ...

So you finally decided to post this. =) I liked how much detail you put in Cami's past. In the last part you put bear instead of beer. But that's ...

EEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!! This one was good to. But I think it could use more Li lol. Anyways in the second paragraph you put hard instead of heard. I liked how you ...

Awww Katie it's so sweet I love it. I'm not going to even say that I know how you feel cause I don't I mean there going to go to ...

I loved it! I hope you still write even if you don't post it here. I love Li the best! In the first paragraph you forgot to put the t ...

Hi!! Okay this looks like a very interesting piece. But there were a few things I would change. There i was standing at the edge of the path that would ...

I my goodness!!!!!!! Bunnie this was so amazing, I like Anabel. I like how you say that Cami misses the sun, and how that even thou she gets the need ...

This was so sad! :cry: I liked it, but it makes you wonder about, which makes me like it even more. I guess because when you left it open like ...

I thought it was pretty good, I'm horrible at grammar so I wont even try to pick that out. To me it seemed like you didn't really have a plot ...

Hi ya Bunnie I see what you mean when you say that the story doesn't really have a love interest. But I did like this one, not as much as ...