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Thank you! :D

Thank you for your help EmmVeePi! I will make sure that I use the criticism the positive way.

Thank you for the compliment. P.S. I do admit the how great the hot chocolate and the blanket part is.

Oh! Thank you very much for pointing out that mistake. I shall edit this as soon as possible.

Wow! Well thanks a lot guys for your suggestions! Actually, this story was not really fictions, it's something that I personally experienced. Although, you people are right about the timeline, ...

Hello everybody, thanks for the review. I'm really greatful to you all. Now, like you people said this one needs some correction work. Well! I'm onto it, right away. And ...

Hey! Thanks Jai. At first, I thought twice about the review you gave but now, I think I'm pretty much understanding what you meant. You helped me a lot. About ...

Hey! Thanks for the help, I wish I if I could have got the complete version, but anyway, thanks for putting in your time. I will surly revise it as ...

Sorry everybody, I know this is pretty long chapter and I waited a lot before posting this one but I had no time these days and it was getting difficult ...

Okay everybody! So I've edited this chapter for the first time, what do you think? Is it better than before, I had some changes in dialog and I added some ...

Hey! Thanks for the review Trish. I figured out most of the mistakes before I posted this chapter but I didn't rectified them because I didn't know how. But the ...

Wow! That was great I have to say. I really liked it, especially the first stanza. You've really explained your points well without loosing the rhyme and flow of your ...

Thanks a lot EliteHusky, I will have a look on this chapter once again and try proofreading it myself. However, I would like my reviewers to help me with this. ...

@EliteHusky, Hey! Thanks for the review, the way you looked at this chapter I got some more ideas about it. But I have to go school now, so I will ...

That is great, really a great one. It was so natural and everything was in a very good flow! But I liked it most because of the reason of the ...