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Wow, this was really a great start. It got me interested, it kept me interested, and I honestly, truly am anxious to go read more. I didn't catch any grammar ...

Ohh..I like this! I stink at grammar, so I'm sorry I can't give you any tips with that, I didn't catch that means you don't have anything blatantly obvious wrong, ...

I really liked how the story of this woman was unveiled as she wrote the letter. At first, you think she could just be at her home, then you think ...

This is a good introduction to a story. It left me wanting to read more ;). If you wanted to make it longer, you could add in more about the ...

This poem was beautifully written. It was honest and true, and displayed a theme that anyone and everyone can relate to, we've all felt it at some point. The first ...

Wow, wow, wow! I loved this, loved this, loved this! It's flawlessly written, and has left me in awe. There are few things I love more than a poem with ...

This was clever and witty, and it had a beautiful flow. Well done! This poem was unique, and I'm sure there is nothing like it out there. As I see ...

I really loved this! It was the perfect length, you described the characters thoughts and feelings very well, I thought that it really stayed true to the characters, and the ...

I think everyone's already said pretty much everything I felt about the book...but too bad, I'm gunna say it allll again! I found Breaking Dawn to be very disappointing. I ...

Although this was beautifully written, I was left feeling very confused. It lacks a plot, and the story changes drastically from the beginning to the end, and it's very short ...

Let me start off my saying that this was a phenomenal piece and probably one of the best I've read on this site in a while. Your descriptions were amazing, ...

Everyone has already mentioned that this resembles the Twilight series, you get the picture, but that's what I was reminded of the whole time reading it. But, anyway, I really ...

Wow, this is super cute! I love Ron and Hermione, and I was a little bit disappointed that we didn't get to see more of their relationship in book 7, ...

This was great! I totally agree, I live in the US, though, but I feel for your troubles across the pond! I would really, really, REALLY love to be a ...

Alrighty, so, I thought this was really a great poem, but I have one problem. It seems like your going with a certian rhyme and rythm (did I spell that ...