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Good question. I'll explain a little about the orbs. The orbs are actually storage devices for massive amounts of supernatural energy. They can be filled with energy either by receiving ...

Back once again. ===================================================== At the base of the mountain that INFRA and ULTRA fought on, INFRA sits on a rock. INFRA: Replaced? Replaced for some second-rater

Kitty: Ah, I see what you mean. Mmm, I'm not sure how that sort of thing might work with a comic strip, but I'll see if I can figure something ...

Thanks Kitty. I was thinking I should use the same name all the time, I'll edit that now. Also, what are stage directions? =)

Very cool. I want to see more! MORE, I say! *ahem* I know this is unedited (and indeed, thrown together during a boring class) but-but-but... typos are my specialty... lol. ...

Hehehe, this is excellent. It's satirical and funny. It reminded me of Barry Trotter in many ways, especially the footnotes. Keep it up, I'd like to see more of Dennis. ...

Mwahaha. I love it. I also love the name "Felix Phelicks". It does feel a little like it belongs between other chapters (does it? If so I haven't read any, ...

Interesting, Mr Mat. You've still got some "pidgeons" floating about, but otherwise it's a nice piece of work. =)

Hehehe. I like this. Be bored more often.

Now this is what I like to see! What a feel-good story! I was moved to tears... When is the movie coming out?

Lol, I wonder where you got the idea to name Farfetch'd "Dux"? =P Loving it. XD

The city's description is total awesomeness. Lide Mad said, the latter of that centence could use a little tweaking. Elsewise, it's an excellent continuation. Now to part IV!

Total coolness. Myth did pretty much point out all the grammar/spelling issues. I want to read the next bit, but luckily you've already written it so I'll go read it ...