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Re: Wrong Way To Cry
Hi yelloworchered. I'm going to start by saying how much I liked this poem. It is a moving piece made with great skill. If someone really said this to a ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: Burden of the Heart
Hi there, sorry, my first message posted as a comment I really like this poem, the rhyming works really well, which is a hard thing to do! The only fault ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: GalactiCats
Hi creativeslayer365, just here for a review. Ok. First of all, may I just say... Oh.My.God. Those cat puns are amazing! They really give your writing your own personal style ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Why She'll Never Get Married
Hello, just a review... First of all, there is a spelling mistake in the first paragraph. Pedal should be petal. Other than this, I found myself really feeling sorry for ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: China Doll
Hi, here for a review! Other than the small mistakes pointed out by ellmist I have no real criticisms of this piece. The imagery is incredible (although I agree that ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Dada Loves Me
Hi, This is a really great poem. I love how you have made it so that the child has no idea what is going on, it moves the reader and ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Untitled (suggestions and constructuve critisism welcome)
sorry, I'm new and i accidentally sent another message. Oops...
Dec 4, 2015