celkin

I didn't think I would enjoy this poem because of its long-phrase structure, but I actually really did! The poem was really emotional and touching. The repetition of the word ...

Before any commentary writing-wise, the topic is very heavy and I think you expressed it beautifully. The only commentary I have to offer writing-wise is to keep one structure throughout, ...

Hey! I love this poem! It really demonstrates what everyone thinks when experiencing pain--'so if my pain isn't as bad as someone else's, it doesn't matter?' I really enjoy the ...

Hey! Thanks for contributing this beautiful poem! I completely agree that rhyming in a poem while keeping flow is very difficult, and I think that maybe you should rhyme a ...

I really enjoyed the beginning of the poem, but I thought the end was kind of strange wording-wise. Although the second person perspective is often okay in poetry, the ending ...

First, I really liked the poem! There's only a couple of things I would edit: the unnecessary punctuation and redundant words. In poetry, sometimes less is more. The phrase "rather ...