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I love this! It's short but yet insightful. I'm thinking that the non use of capitalization is your way of writing? If so, I won't comment on that. I personally ...

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I love this! It's short but yet insightful. I'm thinking that the non use of capitalization is your way of writing? If so, I won't comment on that. I personally ...

It is the best policy, right?

Thank you for your honesty. I know this wasn't my best work. Was just trying to get out some anger so I just scribbled this up! Once again, thank you! ...

Thank you for your honestly. I know this wasn't my best work. Was just trying to get some anger out so i just scribbled this up! Once, again thank you! ...

Thank you so much for your review, means an awful lot! I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem. -M

Thank you for the kind words! This piece gave me a bit of a hassle because I didn't know how exactly to separate the 2 dialogues. "That was it. And ...

I appreciate this very much! Thank you got the read! -M

Thank you, Sharon! I'm glad you liked it! -M

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Reading this was a bit of a challenge, mainly because it felt like you jumped from one to the next. You also failed to use commas which played a part ...

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Firstly, this was a strongly written piece. However, I think this should have been done in a poem form so that the dramatic effect of it could be felt. "Though, ...

Mavis, thank you so much. This was well appreciated. Your tips are really helpful and i will put them to use. The part where i didn't put a space after ...

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased that my work can be expressed and be felt by others. Feels good to know that others can relate. Once again, this means ...

Thank you so much for this! I will definitely use your tips. Critiquing is always good and it's always helpful. I look forward for more to come. Thank you once ...

The note at the end was truly beautiful! The lyrics were lovely too! Keep up the good work.