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AnnaBETH lol but yes it is.. its from the 4th book (battle of the Labyrinth)

yeah.. heard that a lot..

yup!

thanks!! Nothing bad?

well, i would say friend.. (references the title) but you never know...

ok, so i didnt understand the overall point of this. You metioned respect women once, and it was almost towards then end... do a follow up on this.... maybe i'll ...

i think what she said, flows better than wht you said. In my opinion. You have to consider the way she is telling the story. (past, 1st person, etc.)

i thought i understood it really well!

thanks!!!

i forgive.. i wasnt really aiming to impress. I was aiming to show what i can do so far with petry, because as i continue to write, i want people ...

i dont understand how the title relates..

im not denying.. im pointing out what you said

Thanks so much!! It's weird becuase a lot of other people didn't like the last two lines..

like you said, i am a begineer, and this is my first poem. There is going to be mistakes, but all of the things you metioned are techniques. Each poet ...