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I like the format of this poem. I like it whenever a poet tries to be creative with his or her work. When it comes to decoration, I'm a sucker ...

I love the rhythm of this poem. It works very well. As I'm reading this, it reminds me of one song I know from a video game called Sonic the ...

Another great poem in the series. It's short, but there's a point in it. Plus, I love what you did with the format. Are you going to do something special ...

You're doing a great job describing the main character's situation. Not only does it give the sense of what's happening in the first scene, but you're letting out the chill ...

This is a short piece, but guess what? It doesn't need to be long because everything has been said in only a few paragraphs. I have this same problem with ...

I think you wrote a lot more than last time, which had me hooked the moment I started reading this. I can still see some of the same mistakes I ...

This was a short piece, but I like it this way. This piece is to describe all that this women went through, I'm assuming, when she was attacked by a ...

LOL. My favorite part of this poem are the two last lines of it. You have all of this technical stuff, and then, there are the two only normal lines ...

Poems like this always break my heart. My sister is lesbian, and honestly, if she was bullied like this, I would love to give everyone the taste of their own ...

I never expected to see a poem in a serial killer's point of view. It's my belief, too, that a negative opinion would be the killer's reason to put everyone ...

This poem almost reminds me of a combination of a Stephen King novel my sister read and Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None. Every time I think of those ...

I saw your author's note, and that helped me realize that you were playing devil's advocate when it comes to the topic of the American Dream. In a way, the ...

Whoa, this is the coldest poem I have ever read on this site. I can't tell if this poem was aimed towards a family member or one of those girls ...

This might sound strange, but I feel as if the stanzas could be three liners instead of four lines. The rhythm just flows better that way. The third stanza might ...

I love all the comparisons you put in, and the rhyming sounded natural. At each metaphor I spotted, my eyes begin water because of the topic of course. I guess ...