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Thank you for sharing this amazing work. I feel that the line "I wonder, when I die, would you even cry?" is something that I really relate to. I often ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Initial Thoughts: Nice! Dreams and what happens when we wake up seemed to be the topic of this story. The quote "That could happen to anyone dreaming ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Wow, is the nurse a vampire? This story had me on the edge of my seat from about the 4th paragraph. The story seems well-rounded with little ...

-Cleo Carson speaking: Wow, did the world just end? That's the vibe I'm getting from the end of the story. I don't see anything to complain about, no grammatical errors ...

Cleo Carson speaking: Wow, great job on writing this poem. I find it relatable because I write my stories at unholy hours of the night. One thing that kinda messed ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Nice writing! I found your description of middle school to be incredibly accurate! I like the idea of returning to a safe place for comfort. Also the ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Oh my. For some reason, this is one of the saddest things I've ever read. I think it's because it (at least I think) relates to memory ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Waitaminute Edith is doing WHAT now? Also, 5th paragraph up from the bottom, it appears you accidentally typed "though" rather than "thought." From what I'm getting(correct me ...

-Cleo Carson speaking I'd like to start with the quote "What greets her inside is both unexpected and expected." I think that the "expected" part refers to the reader, who ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Wow! When I started reading, this kinda reminded me of the song "These are a few of my Favorite Things" from the movie "The Sound of Music." ...

-Cleo Carson speaking You made the mistake that I almost did. Good thing I caught myself and told my Uber to keep driving, as something wasn't right. When we both ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Oh wow! I don't even know where to start! This article is the perfect amount of scientific fact mixed with philosophy! I like the idea of comparing ...

-Cleo Carson speaking I am reading this scientific article shortly after I read the scientific article "I AM VERY ENTHUSIASTIC" and I must say, I am very pleased with this ...

-Cleo Carson speaking First of all, I'd like to lead off with the quote "Poop." It is excellently descriptive and a true masterpiece of a sentence. Frankly, I agree with ...

-Cleo Carson speaking Whoa! We aren't even in the woods yet and someone has already died. I feel like this story could become a great dark fairy-tale! Also a dagger ...