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WOW this is amazing it is funny the way you put it (without insulting Pokemon) You made it seem very long it is but you really really extended the length ...

I like the end were you wrote YOUR SICK! I don't know why but it made me laugh. I also like the part where it says TAKE THE GARBAGE OUT ...

I like how you wrote it it is very cool the way it flows but you could have made it a little longer so keep up the good work. you ...

I really think it could be a lot longer but is awsome for the humor section i just love it which I could say over and over and over and ...

I woned what it is about but is very good and could be a little longer.but over all it is very good it is very sad to which shows that ...

I like how it rolls off the tong it is very smooth and i like what it is about too. the beginning is a little sad bu then it gets ...

I like what it is about but it does not roll of the tong very easily. It is very creative the part were it says your pages are silk your ...

It flows across the tong really well it has a very emotional feeling and good wording. Is The setting about a girl having nightmares because the part about monsters makes ...