casey_kent

It's was interesting but I think that it was little too figurative. Maybe you can add a few more lines so that the people would know what really happened. It ...

It's not quite a romantic story since it's about him and his dad. The love story wasn't quite noticeable. But it was nice.

cool. I've been trying to find ways to get money and this kinda helped. Thanks!

Nice article. But you have to break up some information though.

i love your story! i love the way you describe the boy! i bet he is really hot. i wish this happens to me or something!

This poem is lovely. It reminds me of my dog that died. I like it. Has great impact on the reader.

Your poem has great impact on the reader. Which is nice. I actually think that your poem is beautiful and very organized and easy to understand. :)

It's nice. I picture hope in you poem. I like it.

It's abstract but in a way graphic. I could definitely see the pictures in my mind, But it's nice, 'coz you express your feelings through this.

It's kinda creepy and uhhm emo-ish but you did a nice job in expressing your feelings! keep up the good work! :)

nice poem. very informative. i bet this is from experience. or not. in anyway i like it. i really do. :)

awww. nice story. cry-worthy. i think the ending is sweet and angsty at the same time.