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I feel my thoughts on this piece will take some time to put into writing, so I'll start from the top -- namely, the title. I really like it. When ...

I disagree about keeping dialogue to a minimum. Have you read the book "Ishmael"? It's entirely all dialogue, and it was a very good book. Lots of well-written dialogue can ...

Before writing an ignorant review, look up what a "poem" is and realize that there are different kinds of poem structures.

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When I said "later tonight", of course I meant a month later. Of course. This is not plotless or boring. However, it is a very difficult story to review. I ...

Hai. I suck at reviewing poetry, but I loved this. The last six lines put a giant grin on my face and tickled the read-a-well-worded-thing bone very well. :D

Sweet poem. I'd like 10 pounds of whatever substances assisted in its creation.

Not much I have to review about this, so a comment instead. - In spite of being a fantastic fairyland, there is surprisingly a lot of death going on here. ...

Don't know what this is about, don't care. Love it. +1

clichéd post-modern crap I'm glad the characters themselves realize the core nature of this piece. I'm also not going to write a full review, because there is nothing here to ...

Ha! Cute poem. +1

Why is this filed under "Article / Essay: Science, General"? This does not look like any of these things.

Spell-check before submitting your work, or you're going to get a lot of angry reviews.

Heya Clock -- vAx is my new account I made before I remembered the password to this account. :P Now that I'm on here, I might as well reply to ...

When I posted this, I tried like ten times to add some spacing. Sadly, YWS only laughed at my efforts, and still resulted in a wall of text. I can't ...