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I'm ambivalent about this. On one hand, there's clear indication of urgency here. The mood is nailed down. It's stressful and sometimes scary to read, by this virtue it is ...

Sweet mother of textwalls. It took me a couple of tries to start reading this. I feel like a mountain climber about to ascend the mighty Everest as I take ...

Truth be said, I think just these friends are partialy responsible for the kind of a man I've become. What kind of man has the narrator become? A shy one? ...

This story has turned into quicksand and swallowed me whole. Partially in a good way, and partially in a bad way. The writing could use a little more variance in ...

As with most of my reviews as of late, this one is difficult to start; I don't know just how much I can do to help this piece. The good ...

And eventually learnt to accept it. Says the heroine, spending the rest of the story not being able to accept it. Wait, that sentence meant she accepted her dreams, but ...

You've got a couple of missed commas and run-on sentences, feel free bug me if you'd like me to do a second pass to sort them out. Right now, the ...

I have landed on an alien planet. I see balumps gamorphing, amirs rubbing themselves during their monthly musth, and pheeners pervojerating gaily, when all of a sudden the gailek arrives ...

This piece is beautiful in a number of ways. It is a well-written, imaginative story that managed to capture me as soon as it got the chance to spread its ...

Well it's almost 3 in the morning, I can't sleep, and this story is doing wonders to send me on my way to bed. Beautiful descriptions of everything, really poetic, ...

As you asked for nitpicks, I'll get them out of the way first. He let his eyes travel from the book to the clock in the dash, which showed 1:21 ...

This story seems to be describing a being of great power. Are beings of great power usually so concerned with how they look that they spend a paragraph describing themselves? ...

Very good. I really didn't see the twist there; I found myself saying out loud, "holy crap!" when I saw Terence do the unkind things he imagined doing to Mr. ...

My first thought on this piece echoes another review left by a friend elsewhere : ...this seemed ineffective. I say it's ineffective because this strikes me as the climax of ...

Looks like Terence is getting some character development in this installation. From a brooding, grim-reaper figure we're accustomed to, a crack on the head breaks his mental seals and he ...