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Re: The Rock Hound 'Chapter One'
thank you
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rock Hound 'Chapter One'
longest page i ever done hope you enjoy it :D
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rock Hound 'Chapter One'
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Jan 27, 2016 - Re: Light and darkness Dec 16, 2015
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Re: Light and darkness
thank you for this review as of now i,m making a new short story like this one could 'gray sky' and yes I'll be fixing the grammar whit this story ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: The Beach
this dos help me under stand it more and it is different i haven't seen one like this no here and now i get what you were going for whit ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Beach
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Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Dark Crystal Part 1
np
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Dark Crystal Part 1
as i,m looking back there were no typos i thought i was one there want any typos :D
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Light and darkness
np
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: '22' Parody
LOLXD
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Light and darkness
i ment to say "some one in the story"
Aug 28, 2015 -
Re: Light and darkness
to be honest i didn't want my character to have a plot to his self but more to give a point more then anything about how much are world is ...
Aug 26, 2015 -
Re: Light and darkness
thank you for this great review
Aug 24, 2015 -
Re: Light and darkness
thank you for this great review
Aug 19, 2015