captainace44

This is absolutely beautiful! You write so well. The imagery was absolutely amazing. Personafacation... forget about it... you are truly a talented writer. Your vocabulary is lucious. Please please pl

Very well written. I love the imagery mixed with the expression of personal emotion/actions. You obviously have been to this place or have imagined it as somewhat of a safe ...

This poem is good. You have a very advanced vocabulary, that is a very rare skill to aquire. The sarcasm in the title is humorous. Your flow seems decent, however ...

Very nice ideas. I see that this is something that has happened, or is happening that has inspired you to create this poem. Someone before me beat me to the ...

I really loved the story, you have a very vivid imagination. Perhaps we could get more description of the characters? "It'd be quiet, I'd told myself, they'd be recovering from ...

Wow I must say this poem has some extravagant flow to it. You are very deep with your thoughts. The words were so incredibly vivid and real. The imagery was ...