captain.classy

Hmm... unsatisfied, relieved, confused, not confused... all of the things that I feel after reading that last bit of your script. Oh, and did I mention, entertained, wanting more, loving ...

This is the cutest thing I've ever seen.

Hey again! So, sorry to be repetitive, but once again you still seem to be focusing all on plot. As as your plot is good - and totally weird and ...

Firestalker! Eep! Of course I remember you! We were besties! And then you dissapeared! Thanks so much for the review.

Thanks for the reviews! I'm not sure what this is going to be. This is part of the first chapter, the next part will open up with her in the ...

Sorry for the double post! Thanks for your review.

Thanks Jane! The spacing's weird, I'm about to go fix it. Sorry if it confused you!

As is man.

Wow, AAAM, wow. That was... really good. Your writing improved a lot towards the end. Your sentences started to mean something, instead of just explain things. There are so many ...

Next part it up :) I would appreciate all of your reviews.

This is kind of sort of a monologue? I did want it critiqued. lol

Snoink! It's not over yet. I guess I forgot to put a (1) in the title. This is only the beginning...

I think your description on him was perfect. I could picture him fine. More description of him would be over-describing.

I'm offended I wasn't mentioned. Haha just kiddin'! This was adorable. Now I feel like writing my own. But of course I won't! Classy people don't copy. :P

*saves spot for epic review to remind herself that she needs to do an epic review* On to math homework!