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Hey there! This was beautiful. So beautiful I almost didn't cringe when you said 'vagina,' but I did. That word is a word that a lot of people are turned ...

Hey there! It seems like you've been given pretty good reviews, and I hope I don't just reiterate what they've already said. But hopefully it will reinforce their ideas and ...

Hey there! This was cute. I actually quite liked it. It was realistic, about how the girl dreams of him saying something romantic when all he says is 'She's too ...

Hey there! I've read your 'spoiler' and I still don't get it. I have one opinion about people who say that most people don't get their poem: that they need ...

Hey there! This is really good. I've never read a poem on here that goes as far into their words as you do. Usually I feel as though certain words ...

Oh hey there wifey-poo. Alright, so this was cute. And sad. And as I already told you, it reminded me of when I had pneumonia. But to the review, which ...

Wasn't this a breath of fresh air? I like sweet stories like this. It reminded me of a cross between "Toy Story" and "The Doll People". There is one occuring ...

Hey there! Well I see that the above reviewers have covered most of the grammer, so I'll just talk about content, hmm? As prologue, this seems very promising. Prologue's aren't ...

Hey there! I’ll march out of darkness with my head held high. I’ll march out of darkness with my eyes to the sky… I’ll come out of shadows and bare ...

Oh hey thar! So there are a few things I would like to point out to you. One of them is the transition between him on the street with the ...

Oh hey there! This was sweet, and you do a good job of projecting your character's voice though it's only a letter. It's very hard to do, but you seemed ...

Hey there! Goodness, that was a weird ending. I'm a bit surprised that you didn't say anything about her running away, or about Harry. I expected you to kind of ...

Hey again! Yes, you've done it. You have made James seem like a sweet and caring individual, but you can still see that he has a lot of passion for ...

Ahh I'm so confused! I'm going to handle this review in parts. Topic Sentence/Paragraph/Second Paragraph Your first sentence is boring. I'm just going to put that out there. I think ...

Hey there! So there was great imagery here. The only thing I feel like I should comment on is your structure. Every other paragraph there was a rhyme. I would ...