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Hey there! As far as the rating goes, I'd just just do 12+ (if you want to be sure) since the content isn't too graphic, but still contains violence. To ...

Hey there Pers! I disagree with Panda (Sorry Panda!) when I sat that this poem flows amazingly. As I was reading it, a smooth and comforting voice came to mind. ...

Hey there! Just a tip, as a member who has been around for a while. If you put spacing between your paragraphs (you can do that by physically clicking the ...

Wow, El, you would make me cry! Quotes 'N' Comments She had been doing concerts at the music hall ever since her graduation from Julliard. So, your writing is beautiful, ...

Hey there! So, this poem was definitely fun to read. If there weren't so many rhymes and repetition of concepts, I would be very, very pleased with this poem. I ...

Hey there! Wow, this is really good. It's extremely interesting, and fun to read. There are a few awkward parts, but I'll help you point those out. I'm going to ...

Hey ranter. Rantress. Ranterama! One big rant. But that's ok, at least you did it in a beautiful way. (I rhymed there, you see it! Of course you do.) The ...

Hey there! So this is a beautiful poem. I really like the imagery and this makes me feel warm inside. However, this is an extremely repetitive poem. There are only ...

Hey there! This is very interesting. I hate aliens. And when you said it was an alien story, I almost considered refusing your request. But I'm here, and I read ...

Hey there! Thanks for the request. This is fairly good. I like the meaning of the poem, but I think you could do a better job at conveying it better. ...

Hey there Shubsters! What's with the name change? Anyways, I'm here! So, this was really good. You have one of those natural voices. Your words flow effortlessly, or at least ...

Hey there! Here to review. So, no one can argue this is a beautifully written piece. However, I feel as if this was written simply for the sake of being ...

Hey there! I liked this, and I think with a bit of fine tuning it will be a wonderful first chapter! Let me start off by saying that I love ...

Hey there! My last review of the holiday season! Why not make it a seasonly story? This was very adorable, and I can totally see it as a childrens book. ...

Hey there! I really like this. The theme is good and well thought out. I like how you played the part of someone who is modern, whether than someone who ...