captain.classy

You have left me, again, with nothing to correct. Triston stood back on the generous arms of the tree that, in that moment, seemed so much wiser than we ever ...

Very interesting! I'm sorry I won't be able to comment on the story in full, but I have some nit-picks for you! “C’mon sleepy,” a calm masculine voice replied. -comma ...

Before I get to my harshness, let me just say you have a beautiful and casual voice, and I loved reading your work. Nit-Pickiness: When I first woke up, I ...

but if there is one thing I have learned most, is that pain, leaves beautiful scars. All the mistakes I found were in your last two lines. The 'but' should ...

Goodness, this was so sad and heartfelt! I am a bit confused by the last two lines though. I feel like you didn't explain them much- I apologize if it's ...

Woah! You have me hooked. The last few lines... I just found it amazing. What a wonderful way to write a story. I am still wondering about the person who ...

Heya JSPike! Classy here, as requested. Let me start off by saying you have a wonderful voice. Your descriptions are all so poetic and wonderful, I just want to read ...

I really like this. You seem to be able to explain your surroundings, which is something I can't do with my story. I am writing one similar to this, similar ...

I really like this. It is probably the best poem I have read all day. I want to comment on your structure. At first I liked it, but as I ...

So short, so short. I think you have a good base for something larger here. In the title, you explain that you are finally you. but you don't really explain ...

Woah, this is so interesting! There was a town meeting that night. I was young, only sixteen. Wow random. This doesn't flow very well. I think you shouldn't explain what ...

Hmm, I don't really have much to say about this. I have no idea where you are going, what you are talking about, and you have no sign of a ...

Hmm... this is very interesting. I would just like to know how he found her? I mean if she doesn't even know where she is, how would he know? I ...

I definitely like this better than the children's story you were inspired by. The only thing I have to say was that in the beginning, you say 'abandoned by its ...

I want to like this poem, but I have no idea what it means. All of the lines make no sense to me. I don't know how to pick anything ...