captain.classy

Hiya! Classy here! let us see what I can do. I deserve all the things You said to me So these lines make the poem not flow well. They are ...

Wow, such a powerful poem LighHawk! Sickness to insanity I question my humanity. I really like these lines. They are the most powerful in your entire poem. A very nice ...

Okay, first off, Van's name is not Freyja, it's evilsnakelady. Haha Okay, here I go. I like this, highly original. I wish you would have extended your metaphor of her ...

I love this! It's so original! It makes me smile, haha. I wouldn't say "living Plastic" Some people probably won't know what that is. I mean, it's a cool line ...

I just want to say that I love this. You should feel honored, because I never say that I love poems. haha I love how original this is! Telling the ...

Woah woah woah. Random much? Since when did this turn into a vampire story? Please please don't make it about vampires. It is not classy (haha) and it is overused. ...

Hey hey! Classy here, as requested! The way the light glinted off the keen blade formed halos on teh walls. -the spelt wrong The way the light glinted off the ...

Hiya OverEasy! Classy here for a review. :) --perhaps he was the punch line-- This line... I don't like it at all - at least the way it was written. ...

Hiya! Classy here, let us begin. A gray prayer to the slate-eyed winter. So I don't really get what the slate is supposed to mean here. I even looked the ...

Very interesting. You need some help on grammar, though. (: I will only point out a few things, though there were many mistakes in here. “Come on Sam” shouted Simon ...

This is so great! I love the part in the beginning, with the naked people. I like it, but at the same time, I don't know why you mentioned it. ...

Nit Pickiness! She ignored her alarm clock when it beeped at 6:30 AM, telling her to wake up and her mother when she came in the room at 6:45 AM ...

Good poem, but I would like you to show us more. You seem to just be telling readers what they should believe, what they should think like. I don't necessarily ...

oo. Seems too good to be true! I'm a little scared. :P Nitty Pickies I know I am privileged to be in imperial palace of the king and enjoying a ...

Classy here, as requested. I had hurt him deeply, I really like to point this out to writers because it improves stories so much. This is an example of 'show ...