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Hey El! Here to comment on the new part and then I'll move on to chapter two. “Listen,” he says, “I don’t mean to scare you, but there’s been a ...

Hey! Finally, I'm here. So, this chapter is a lot to take in. I'm not fan of piling descriptions of characters all in one spot, and frankly, it could get ...

Mkay, I have two things to point out. The statue is the finger to the gods... why? Can you explain this to me? It sounds poetic and beautiful, but what ...

Hey buddy, here as requested. (: So, I haven't read other reviews, so sorry if there's repetition, but here it goes. This was a typical 80's movie story line. I ...

Hey buddy. Sorry this took so long, I've been really, really busy. So, this is awesome. You probably know that. The imagery, the weird fantasy aspects... it's just original and ...

Goodness, Skins! This was truly amazing. As I sat there reading it, I started to act it out. It was really fun to say, and to pretend that I knew ...

Hey there! So this was a very interesting beginning. Though I think you are rushing too much, I think you introduced your main character perfectly. You didn't sit there and ...

Hey there! So, this was good - really good. What I liked most was the symbolism and foreshadowing. The continuous mentioning of 'the game' reminded me of "the Catcher in ...

Hai there! Here as requested. Let's see. So since I didn't read the other parts, I can only comment on the content of this one. I hope that's all right? ...

Heh. I just have to say that the most interesting thing about this was your voice. This is definitely a good thing. I have no idea what this is about, ...

Hi there! I don't know if there's any chapters before this, so I'll just comment on the content of this one. So do you notice how every sentence in the ...

Hey there! I haven't read the other chapters, but I'll just comment on the content of this one! One guy in the Fire section looked right at me and winked. ...

Hey there! I'm not a fan of the Twilight series, but I really liked this. It took the vampire vibe to an entirely new, entirely not-lame level. I think the ...

Hey there! My blue star review! haha So parts of this just felt like I was reading a summary about Greek mythology. It just sounded like facts being stated in ...

Hai there! Here as requested! So I don't have much to say about this. It was very entertaining, and though you used many, many cliche's in here, it was still ...