canislupis

[edit]This has gotten quite a few reviews, so sorry if I repeated anything. Also, has this changed recently? I cut and pasted it into Word, and have a different version. ...

Hi there! I'm not sure why you took this down... Just because you have to bring it in to school doesn't mean it can't still be up here for everyone ...

Hey! Here is your promised review. I really liked this! Nice job. :) It feels like it has been edited, even though I think you said it was a first ...

Hey there! I will get to reviewing this as soon as possible. By the way, I am trying to cut and paste this into Word so I can print it ...

but I do know that who ever gets the kill willl get most of the meats, but usually its a free-for -alll(unless the alpha wolf says so) all in alll ...

Hi! I enjoyed reading this. :) Your writing style is really cool, and I actually think there was about the right amount of description, contrary to other reviewers. The biggest ...

Hey there! I'm really sorry, but reading this, it almost looks like it's bordering between PG-13 and R, and I'm only 13. I know I promised a review, but I ...

Hey there! I love historical fiction, especially Tudory-type stuff. ;) Well, here goes. I stumbled into a dark, mysterious room. It was chilly, as if some one had left all ...

Hi there! Here it goes: Veni Vidi Vici I came, I saw, I conquered Eh… I know this has been said already, but get rid of the translation. It’s distracting ...

Hi! Here is your promised review. :) I really liked reading this piece, and I found it touching and pretty original. However, in my second read-through I found a few ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this one as well, and can't wait for the next one. One question: Why is it in a quote box? I found that distracting. Also, ...

Hi Wolf! Haven't seen you in a while... :) Anyway, add me to the list! I'm interested in seeing where this is going. 1:Hmm... Obviously she's having trouble in school, ...

Hi there! I just have to say I really enjoyed reading this. It was excellently constructed, flowed well (for the most part), was free of mechanical errors, (though I may ...

Hi there! I like your story, but there are quite a few errors throughout, in plot and mechanics. I’m going to go through the first paragraph: The panther paced his ...

Ooh.... One more thing I noticed: Even though this is fantasy, I think it would be good if you incorporated more of the natural wolf behavior/hierarchy type stuff. I know ...