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Re: there is nothing outside the text
Hai :3 chi
Jul 25, 2025 -
Re: my orion
Hai :3 There’s something really special about this poem. I love the way love is treated like an elemental force, both sacred and dangerous!! The tone is celestial but grounded ...
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Re: There, Yonder
Hai :3 This is such a delicate and haunting poem!! I love the way it moves between the transient and the permanent, the coming and going versus the staying. There’s ...
Mar 9, 2025 -
Re: Wilted Flowers of Spring
Hai :3 This is such a wistful, bittersweet poem!! There’s such a strong seasonal motif throughout, with this gorgeous transition from winter to spring, but instead of renewal, there’s just ...
Mar 6, 2025 -
Re: when i ate the mold - IV (or, the rabbit)
Hai :3 Oh my goodness, return of the not-so-mighty man!! I was wondering when his story would come full-circle >.> He's surely a character!! I am so obsessed with collection ...
Mar 6, 2025 -
Re: when i ate the mold - III
Hai :3 This is brutal in the best way!! There’s this sharp, eerie rhythm to it that makes it feel like a march toward something inescapable. Every line has this ...
Mar 5, 2025 -
Re: Nature's Enemy
Hai :3 This is such a quietly powerful and deeply resonant poem!! The way it captures both the desperation and the inevitability of human destruction is so well done, and ...
Mar 5, 2025 -
Re: honey, you're more broken than i can fix
Hai :3 This is stunningly melancholic in the best way!! The weight of this poem feels so lived-in, like every line carries years of knowing someone, of watching them decay ...
Mar 4, 2025 -
Re: when i ate the mold - II
Hai :3 Oooooh, this one is short but it cuts deep!! It feels almost like an incantation, something ancient and heavy, like a whispered curse or a prophecy. There’s this ...
Mar 4, 2025 -
Re: i can feel the heart breaking as one
Hai :3 This is so eerie and devastating and beautiful, I'm obsessed!! The whole poem feels like this slow bleed, this inevitable unraveling that’s both sickening and hypnotic. It’s got ...
Mar 4, 2025 -
Re: *****
Hai :3 This is such a heavy poem, but it’s also so beautifully written!! The imagery here is just stunning ~~ Like, the doll metaphor is so sharp and tangible, ...
Jan 20, 2025 -
Re: sarcotesta
Hai :3 This is absolutely mesmerizing!! I’m so in love with how visceral and vivid this poem is!! It’s raw, brutal, and tender all at once, and I can feel ...
Jan 19, 2025 -
Re: little league
Hai :3 I haven't reviewed in so long o.O Anyway, this is so haunting and beautiful!! The whole poem feels like it’s unraveling in slow motion. It brought me into ...
Jan 6, 2025 -
Re: i have seen the end and it is beautiful
Hai :3 Okay, forewarning, I don't know how to review prose!! Also, secondary, as a religious person, I am going back and forth on this. Blasphemy is, of course, inherently ...
Dec 2, 2024 -
Re: inertia of moving on
Hai :3 This is such a layered, haunting poem!! It's like each section feels like its own distinct yet interconnected vignette, with so much depth packed into such a small ...
Dec 2, 2024
