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  • Poetry » General, General Re: there is nothing outside the text

    Hai :3 chi

    Jul 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: my orion

    Hai :3 There’s something really special about this poem. I love the way love is treated like an elemental force, both sacred and dangerous!! The tone is celestial but grounded ...

    Apr 6, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: There, Yonder

    Hai :3 This is such a delicate and haunting poem!! I love the way it moves between the transient and the permanent, the coming and going versus the staying. There’s ...

    Mar 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Wilted Flowers of Spring

    Hai :3 This is such a wistful, bittersweet poem!! There’s such a strong seasonal motif throughout, with this gorgeous transition from winter to spring, but instead of renewal, there’s just ...

    Mar 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: when i ate the mold - IV (or, the rabbit)

    Hai :3 Oh my goodness, return of the not-so-mighty man!! I was wondering when his story would come full-circle >.> He's surely a character!! I am so obsessed with collection ...

    Mar 6, 2025
  • Other » General, General Re: when i ate the mold - III

    Hai :3 This is brutal in the best way!! There’s this sharp, eerie rhythm to it that makes it feel like a march toward something inescapable. Every line has this ...

    Mar 5, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nature's Enemy

    Hai :3 This is such a quietly powerful and deeply resonant poem!! The way it captures both the desperation and the inevitability of human destruction is so well done, and ...

    Mar 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: honey, you're more broken than i can fix

    Hai :3 This is stunningly melancholic in the best way!! The weight of this poem feels so lived-in, like every line carries years of knowing someone, of watching them decay ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when i ate the mold - II

    Hai :3 Oooooh, this one is short but it cuts deep!! It feels almost like an incantation, something ancient and heavy, like a whispered curse or a prophecy. There’s this ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i can feel the heart breaking as one

    Hai :3 This is so eerie and devastating and beautiful, I'm obsessed!! The whole poem feels like this slow bleed, this inevitable unraveling that’s both sickening and hypnotic. It’s got ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: *****

    Hai :3 This is such a heavy poem, but it’s also so beautifully written!! The imagery here is just stunning ~~ Like, the doll metaphor is so sharp and tangible, ...

    Jan 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: sarcotesta

    Hai :3 This is absolutely mesmerizing!! I’m so in love with how visceral and vivid this poem is!! It’s raw, brutal, and tender all at once, and I can feel ...

    Jan 19, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: little league

    Hai :3 I haven't reviewed in so long o.O Anyway, this is so haunting and beautiful!! The whole poem feels like it’s unraveling in slow motion. It brought me into ...

    Jan 6, 2025
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: i have seen the end and it is beautiful

    Hai :3 Okay, forewarning, I don't know how to review prose!! Also, secondary, as a religious person, I am going back and forth on this. Blasphemy is, of course, inherently ...

    Dec 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: inertia of moving on

    Hai :3 This is such a layered, haunting poem!! It's like each section feels like its own distinct yet interconnected vignette, with so much depth packed into such a small ...

    Dec 2, 2024


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