candyhearts

Hai :3 Such a neat poem!! This is so achy and restrained!! I love how this poem feels like it is circling love without being able to speak about it ...

Hai :3 Firstly, I love how this poem treats apology as an intrusion instead of the traditional idea of healing. That is SUCH a strong central idea!! It's a simple ...

Hai :3 Oh my, this has such a heavy, reflective sadness to it!! I love how you use weather as both an emotional mirror and something that resists being understood. ...

Hai :3 I wrote half of a review for this and never finished it >.< This is so intimate and vicious at the same time though!! I love how the ...

Hai :3 Such a necessary poem!! There’s something so powerful about how direct the language is here. It doesn’t try to hide behind metaphor at first; it speaks plainly, almost ...

Hai :3 This is so grim and theatrical in a really striking way!! There’s this intense fatalism running through the whole poem, like the speaker isn’t moving toward death so ...

Hai :3 Oh wow, this is so sharp and despairing!! There’s this frantic, accusatory rhythm running through the whole thing, like the speaker is trying to explain something impossible while ...

Hai :3 This poem is so tender and aching!! There’s such a soft, intimate loneliness here, like the whole poem exists in that strange half-space between memory, fantasy, and grief ...

Hai :3 Ohhh, adore this!! This poem is absolutely devastating!! There’s such a raw, spiraling ache to this poem, and I really admire how honestly it captures the horror of ...

Hai :3 Yay, short poetry!! This is so quiet and devastating!! I love how short it is, because the restraint makes the emotion feel even heavier. There’s this eerie calm ...

Hai :3 What a neat poem!! I love how the poem keeps circling back to “corpses” until the word becomes less like a single image and more like its entire ...

Hai :3 Ohhh this is so quietly tense and beautiful!! I love how the poem takes something usually warm and comforting, the afternoon sun, and makes it feel almost intrusive ...

Hai :3 Oh oh oh this is such a fun, spiraling poem!! I love how it feels almost like a clock coming apart in the middle of a city. There’s ...

Hai chi :3 Whoa, your poetry has changed... I love how this poem feels like it’s thinking while walking, or maybe thinking after almost not surviving a walk. There’s this ...

Hai :3 This is such a painfully honest poem!! It captures loneliness in such a direct, aching way, and I really admire how unguarded it feels. There’s no attempt to ...