calondra1024

I love this! It's mysterious and attention grabbing. It would make a cool story in my opinion. It makes you wonder what the memory was or why it was so ...

I love this! I love how you switch from all the end words rhyming to every other word rhyming. I don't know anything about poetry so I don't know what ...

Okay. I love this! It is deep and meaningful. It was descriptive and easy to understand. It made you really think about what it was talking about and wonder what ...

Some of these didn't make any sense what so ever. I don't have anything against that! But It would have been nice if they made a little sense at least. ...

I like the concept of this. But, I wonder if since you said it was supposed to be a poem that it be more in a poem format of some ...