callmeike

Hello there! Ike here for a review. I like this poem but the only problem that i have with it is.... ITS TOO SHORT! Please consider adding on to this ...

Hi there! Ike here for a review :) I really like this story. I love the way you described the characters, it was in such a way that it felt ...

Hi there Ike here for a review! First of all i liked reading it. It made me laugh and sort of think of myself. I thought it to be a ...

That poem was great. I personally felt the emotion in it because I have a younger sister. I love how you kind of gave the brothers life there and how ...

That was amazing. I loved the imagery you put in it and I especially like the way that you made the "Beast" talk to him. It gave me chills when ...

So much yes!! I am not really a poem kind of guy, but wow! This is really good. I love the imagery and the description you put into it. I ...

It was interesting. I really liked it because it felt raw. There is a few punctuation errors that I wont get into because I am pretty bad at that too ...

I loved this story. I enjoyed how fast paced it was but it was not hard to understand. It takes skill to do that, and you did it in such ...

I like it a lot! You gave very good description and i really enjoyed reading it. I only have a few things to say. I feel that you used the ...

I really like this piece because It really shows some raw emotion. But yes you do have punctuation errors but nothing time and practice will fix. :) please keep writing

I loved your description of the sea he was on and the imagery you used. The only thing I could possibly think of improving on would be punctuation, and you ...