The Brave One

by dancingclouds

  • Poetry
  • Other

Published February 23, 2012

Below the husky moon you lie
You don't take a breath
And although it seems impossible,
You taught us all how to be brave
And how not to be dead.
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callmeike
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callmeike wrote a review Review · Feb 24, 2012

Hello there! Ike here for a review.
I like this poem but the only problem that i have with it is.... ITS TOO SHORT! Please consider adding on to this because it has great potential.


dancingclouds
dancingclouds replied · Feb 28, 2012

thanks! I'll have a go at making it longer!:)



seagulls are bad sea chickens with no sense of humanity
— Kay (novembercrow)