caerauboy

I enjoyed this poem, its as if you've managed to fit in how a lot of people don't seem to realise how good things are when they have them and ...

I really enjoyed the poem I like how it reflects how a lot of people try to cling on to they're idealistic ideas and begin believing in them so much ...

hey, I really enjoyed this poem and feel I'm not sure how exactly but really happy that its my poem that inspired this poem :) I like how you made ...

I think this poem is good, and shows the darkness and truth of alcoholism that its because of something, to drown some pain out or to stop them thinking about ...

Hey the song seems pretty depressing and show the blatant theme or sorrow, depression and loss. It also shows the feelings and thoughts of lots of people dealing with loss ...

The poem is ok, but could be lots better, its too repetetive and typical of what many would expect from a teenager, the over use of hate is too common ...

I really enjoyed the poem. The whole story of it was great. I really liked how you used religion in a story part of which is about temptation in a ...

Hey. I enjoyed this poem the anger and fury throughout is obvious and simply shown though with a confusing but good style of writing. It seems you do as I ...

I didn't really enjoy this poem, as it seems you have slipped into the narrow minded view that all 'chavs' are bad and smoke and drink, many of my friends ...

I really like the poem, and how abrupt it is at times and its goes well with the poem, how so many people start so innocent and young and are ...

I enjoyed this poem. Short and sweet uplifting poem.I think it sums up the love in everybody and that before the death or the last thing you want to tell ...

This is quite a dark and interesting poem, but its a very good one too. I think it's clever how you've created a sense of emptiness by saying out of ...

I found the poem good but also disturbing, but disturbing as it is it kept me reading and thinking, what could it be that made you feel this way. You ...