cactuslily

Hello, afoxlover184!! Welcome to YWS! First off, I love the cover art you chose for this poem! It's super cute hehe. Back to the poem itself, I enjoy how simple ...

Okay first off, woah... Oh my goodness this was based on your first night drive experience?!? This was such a crazy ride, both in your case and me reading this ...

I love a good fantasy poem! Similar to what Mangledsoul mentioned, I'm wondering why the speaker feels held back from explaining further regarding their visions. Is it by choice? Are ...

Hi Cherie! For starters, I absolutely adore the subject and tone of this poem! It really features the quiet parts of life. Something so unassuming as a ladybug- like the ...

Heyoo 1nsouciant and welcome to YWS!! cactuslily here for a review :) I just gotta say, omg I L O V E this piece! It was quite obscure and confusing ...

Hello Madeline and welcome to YWS, cactuslily here for a review! I just wanna say that I can totally relate to this. That feeling of falling for the image/perception of ...

Hello kaydenwrites and welcome to YWS!! Overall, I could totally relate to this poem and you captured the fallout of a relationship very well! A lil nitpick I have (which ...

Heyoo and welcome to YWS!! Let me first start off by saying OMG I F E E L this poem so hard, it hurts how relatable it is because of ...

Heyoo!! Welcome to YWS and omg congrats on your SECOND star! Overall I just adore the imagery you create in this piece and I could tell you really put thought ...